Mirillian

So, I tried to incorporate the advice I got from my last drawing of her. Better face and eyes, much shapelier legs, and a sorry attempt at tighter clothes. I'd point out jaw shape, too, but that lesson doesn't show from this angle. Hrm.
Plus less saturated, more "demonic" colours.

I had a fever when I drew the lineart, and it shows. It's wobbly, and her arms are all kinds of screwed up.

BUT I still like this version a thousand times better than the first one (even if that dress was snazzier). Thanks SO MUCH for your critisism, guys.

(and please don't let that discourage you from critisising this one - I can always use help )